
Echoes in the dark
This concerns the story “Echoes in the dark” by Saira Owais Adil (YW, January 31).
It was an entertaining read, especially for those who enjoy spooky tales shared among friends and cousins. The writer nicely captured the atmosphere of late-night storytelling, where ordinary sounds suddenly feel mysterious and frightening. The way the narrator described their fear, while still trying to appear brave in front of their cousins, felt very natural.
I liked the story because it reflected the excitement of sharing horror stories during family gatherings, which is very common in such settings.
Usman Tariq,
Faisalabad
The weight of expectations
This is with reference to the story “The weight of expectations” by Hoorain Imran (YW, January 31).
The story gave a meaningful message about how expectations can sometimes create emotional pressure, especially for teenagers. It reminded readers that helping and caring for others should not always be driven by the hope of getting something in return.
It was a thoughtful and emotional piece that teaches young readers about the importance of love without expectations.
Imran Qadir,
Hyderabad
A call for kindness
This is with reference to the story “A call for kindness” by Kashif Hussain (YW, January 24).
It was not just a story, but a reflection of everyday reality. If we cared for these living beings the same way we care for ourselves, we could save many lives. We often see animals losing their lives under moving vehicles.
We must be more careful while driving. Remember that animals feel pain and hunger just like humans do.
Abdul Ali Laghari,
Sanghar
The room where everything changed
This concerns the story “The room where everything changed” by Alishba Shamshad (YW, January 31).
The story perfectly captured the emotions of a student who worked hard, yet could not achieve her goals. The expectations of loved ones and seeing your dreams fulfilled by others, can slowly weigh on you and break your heart. I especially admire how the girl’s family remained supportive and how, by the end, she began to let the light back into her life.
I am grateful to YW for publishing such a relatable story that teaches us not to let our failures trap us permanently, but also shows us a way to keep moving forward with hope and patience.
Ayesha Ali,
Islamabad
Published in Dawn, Young World, March 28th, 2026
































